Story

It all started when he forced the radioactive fluid down the poor creature's throat. My monkey's throat, Bobo's throat. That maniac had escaped from the John Paul Mental Institution, robbed that power plant, and made that army. An army of all powerful minions, of all the pets in the world. He made animals into powerful beings using radioactive fluids. He stole my monkey. I'm going to get him back. Thing is, i've got to get to Bolivia. My mom, doesn't have much money. My dad, too stuck up and rich to even care about mom and me. Now I have to figure out a way to get to Bolivia and save Bobo.

Comment: I think the 1st sentence doesn't fit in context with the 2nd sentence. it just sounds weird. Why Bolivia? I i think the hamsters name should be something else. im not sure. this is just my opinion though.Will Wickham